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Miner
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PostSubject: Sendronea    Sendronea   I_icon_minitimeThu Aug 30, 2012 11:37 pm

I am MINDJACCKER here to bring you a new dimension, Sendrona.
Sendrona is a desert dimension that is full of adventure! Descover Past cizilizations and there leaders Tumes and pyramids! The Evil Pharoah Is casted by Deplros spell and you must save the land!



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Boss: The mummy













Not A Very Throgh Idea, Ill expan on it If FoD accepts it



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PostSubject: Re: Sendronea    Sendronea   I_icon_minitimeFri Aug 31, 2012 11:08 am

As I said to miner, I was refraining from posting due to sounding too harsh. But he wanted me to post, so here I am and I'll be blunt.

Cactus monster? Somewhat original but still very lacking. My question is: Why?
You could have suggested a whole new thing.

Deplorian guards- Would have made more sense if you called them the Pharoahs Guard. What would they drop?

King cobra- snakes are too hard to make, unless we get a pro modder.

Citizen- can you trade with them? Do they fight with you if you attack a guard? Right now they are just dolls walking around with no purpose.

Elephants- not the most original but I like it.

Pyramid- how does a pyramid get tricked? Make sure, if you make these, they aren't just a building that goes up a little bit. Real pyramids are huge, expansive.

City- care to go into this a little more? All you said was city.

Statues- that's kinda strange. What use do they have?

Hard oil- in the real world we call that coal. Also, I'd rather the whole "oil" thing be restricted to Gelidus Inferos.


Platinum- nothing much to say here, though you need to go more in depth into that.

Platinum orb- interesting.

Oil shard- again, coal.

Soft torch- why is it soft, exactly?

Platinum weapons and armor- so there is more than one weapon, eh?

Pure water- was that taken from me? .-.

Cactus juice- nausea for 15 seconds is about 12 seconds too long. People would be throwing up.

The mummy- really? Extremely uninspired. All this time you talked of a pharaoh and the boss is a mummy.
Suggestion for the boss: Scorpion King. This would be the pharaoh.
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PostSubject: Re: Sendronea    Sendronea   I_icon_minitimeFri Aug 31, 2012 3:41 pm

-Pure water WAS inspired by you

-Squrpion King is A great idea!

-Ok the oil will stay for Gleduis Infurnous

-Pharoh gaurds? I ment for Deplro to send them to Gaurd the citys, Yea i guess you can call them that

-Cactus monsters i actully realy like, but thats my opinan

-Citizens are scared of the gaurds and WILL trade with you

-The citys are made of sandstone and thats basicly it

-The statues Hold chests

-Perhaps Change Snakes to squrpions

-And again, Ill improve the idea If you accept it, i dont want to waste my time doing something that will not be chosen.




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PostSubject: No   Sendronea   I_icon_minitimeFri Aug 31, 2012 8:08 pm

I don't think this will be chosen.Basically it's a bit too unoriginal. Although some ideas can be recycled.
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PostSubject: Re: Sendronea    Sendronea   I_icon_minitimeFri Aug 31, 2012 8:12 pm

Tbh, some of the ideas are great. The problem i see is the fact that it is a desert dimension. I mean, it's quite unoriginal. A desert is a biome, and i don't think we should add a biome for a dimension. We already got forest and snow.
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